Why are all poets of this century so fucking pretentious?
I am sick of hearing about eclipses, stars and the fucking moon. I dare you, write what you feel, do not compare anything, just write what you feel, that is much harder than rhyming about soaring leafs and moonlight, that is much more beautiful as well.
Also, using fancy words does not make you a poet.
Also, do not call yourself a poet, it is pretentious and lame, let someone else give you the title.
Try a little harder to stay with your feet on this earth, being down to earth is something that is very much needed.